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I'm careless look at me, it's obvious

I see your face and it's like fire under my skin

creeping and sneaking under the skin

about the same of what I'd love my skin to be stolen by.

I have these internal escapist thoughts

a fantasy mother would destroy my childhood

for thinking such things

are illegal when of you

although...so delicious are they.



I always said I didn't want you to push me away

but

I imagine you pushing me against that wall

a revolving head

soft blushing lips

a traveling pair of hands

which I wouldn't stop no matter.



Sigh and moan

gasp and arc

still covered with softer touches than your skin

look at what things we advantage

I young

you experienced

You're fingers curve right under my face

touching it gently to yours

I want to keep it soft and sweet

but my body wanted it all

up and down

left and right

I didn't mind

I rather preferred it together.



I stepped off the dock and let it fly off

stripped off the bark and wood and let the fire burn

the water seeped in like a pleasurable candy

the waves crashed and roared

I tossed and turned

flipped and bent

arcing arcing arcing

Ohh

all around a french twist

all like a symphony we sang like an opera.

Oh what a show!

So sweet sounding was these laying

flexy bending darlings!

Clenching your back

holding close

it never ends

I never want it to...



Letting go

we relaxed the muscles

laying

staring into each other

gingerly touching the faces

leaning in for the first again out of many this moment

felt my hands on your chest

lean and pale

I walked a bit inside

one last time then...

lifting off

Ahh

how I love English and Drama
Sorry for being such a tranny whore about this BUUUUUUT
Again
Figure it out and you will be my God.

; P
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CornwallisFrenchFry Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know, whenever I read this it's so... moving.
the way you lace in the symbolism is just so natural. I don't even think about it when I write. Mine is all choppy.
And the language, it's so beautiful. It flows wonderfully.
It's wonderful. A true masterpiece in my opinion.
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ariel44 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry I replied so freaking late bro xD
But thank so much! Oh my God like seriously THANK YOU SO MUCH that's just so awesome of you to say that.
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CornwallisFrenchFry Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
U WELCOME
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